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Leoster and the Tooth of Ishtar, Part 3Leoster and the Tooth of Ishtar, Part 3Leoster and the Tooth of Ishtar, Part 3 by *brothejr
Note to the reader: This story is based off of some D&D homebrew content. This includes the idea that there are only chromatic dragons, no metallic dragons. Along with this, these dragons are split along the lines of evil/neutral and good/neutral. On top of that, over a thousand years ago the different dragon clans signed a dragon non-aggression treaty. This treaty means that no dragon will attack another nor will they help the lesser beings with their wars. While the dragon on dragon fights have essentially ended due to a sort of mutually assured destruction between each other, many quietly ignore the second half. The evil dragons are more overt about helping their allies the good dragons are more covert about it. (Black and Red dragons are evil, Blue and Green dragons are good, and White dragons are neutral.)
The ruined city of Ishtar that sat in the center of what had been a great
I've read everything you sent and concluded, unfortunately, that this is not a project I can accept. The level of characterization, story, and literary quality isn't ready for the kind of work I do.
I'd recommend putting this aside for a while and do some reading, studying how professional writers put a novel together, writing some new exercises, rewriting, getting whatever feedback you can and rewriting again.